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Nah, the closeness in sound (not necessarily rhyme) between lines 4 and 5 add impact:
Big fat gay twat...
Dutch Stan.
Ideally it should link between the preceding and following rhyme, as mine below does. But maybe you're right that using 'A' itself again takes away a bit of variety. Anyway, do what you like, we'll have to wait for 26's arbitration.
Maltese Dev, madder than King Kev...
Tell us why God made him, Rev.
Tell him where you live and he'll come and groom yer kids...
Blood's red, kills threads...
Mad Dev.
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