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Mockney, do you ever read collections of short stories? I reckon they'd send you over the edge. They're forever leaving dangling threads, and things or characters you'd like to know more about.
I like the Black Mirror thing of it being a glimpse into an alternate reality. If you could only spend a couple of days in an alternate world, you could only really see a couple of things in focus, but there would be all sorts of interesting people or ideas that you'd like to know more on the periphery, things that would drive you mad because you'd been pulled away before you could find out more. |
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My solution would've been to have him hire someone to steal her implant (like the girl at the party) after he'd become more obsessed and aware that after deleting Jonas', that was his only choice ...possibly killing her in the process even? only to find out he was actually wrong (or that it wasn't as bad as he imagined) That would've perhaps given it a bit more scope/weaved in some of the other elements/made it more dramatic. But then that probably would've felt a bit too OTT in a 45 minute setting. And the fact that he wasn't just right all along, but that it was worse, made a good use of the "do you really want to know?/Truth Hurts" factor. I think that last scene when he was goading her to show him was suitably dramatic, and alarmingly plausible enough tbh.. Quote:
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I'm not that bad. The one that bothered me the most was the one with the most tied up ending, but just the least drawn characters.I think we should write one Mike. Call it White Window. No one would clock on. |
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On the whole grain thing, I don't think it purported to be a download of all your memories, so much as a direct recording of what you see/hear, without all the other sensory overlays you get with a memory. Basically a live feed from your auditory/optical cortex (which made the location a bit silly, as it happens) Otherwise, reviewing past sexual encounters would be just like actually going through them again. No need to simultaneously have sex/masturbate.
I think was quite an important point to bear in mind in the closing scene when all he could do was review his relationship almost as a series of home movies, without being able to tap into any of the positive emotions. If you could actually full on, relive memories then people might spend their whole live re-living happier times from their past, completely ignoring the present. Be a bit like those "dream junkies" in Until The End of the World. |
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